Snippet time…contest (updated)

So, you may or may not know that I’m wrapping up the Hunters series.  Sticky post…read below for newer posts. (contest)

I guess it’s a good enough point to do it.

Sales are slumping off and although this wasn’t the way I’d planned to end it, at least it wasn’t right after Nessa’s book…I wanted to tell her story.  I wanted to tell Toronto’s story.  I got to tell both.

There are other books I wanted to write in that world, but…well.  We don’t get everything we want in life, especially when sales are sliding off and it’s a crazy-tight market anyway. Le sigh.

Here’s a good long peek at the book…and a chance to enter for a goody bag giveaway at the end.


It was frustrating as hell, he decided, to have a woman only a couple of dozen yards away, sitting in a hot tub full of water, a woman he wanted like he wanted to breathe, and knowing she’d laugh at him if he tried to go to her.

You won’t be seducing me . . .

She meant it.

No grabby hands

Shit. She’d given him the back-off and he had to respect that. Until he could get her to change her mind.

About the grabby hands thing, the seducing her thing, because damn it, if he didn’t have a taste of her, he’d lose his mind.

“You already have,” he muttered.

Determined to distract himself, he grabbed the phone and put in a call to Rafe while he went about making himself something to eat  If he couldn’t stae one hunger, he’d sate the other. A quick rundown about what had happened and he threw the name Kit in there.

“The only Kit I’m familiar with is a werewolf inChicago—married to the Master there.”

“No. It’s a male—he’s involved in this somehow.”

Rafe was quiet. “Okay. We’ll start looking around.”

That managed to take up a whopping three minutes. Scowling, he stabbed at his steak as he flipped it over the grill. It was still rare when he was finished with it and that was how he wanted it. If he hadn’t had Sylvia here, he would have gone hunting for his meal—he ached for it, but he didn’t think it would do his seduction efforts any good if he went and ran down a deer and then tried to seduce her.

Not that she would be very surprised. She was a damned vampire.

But he was going to play the gentleman, eat his damned steak and then pretend to be a nice host—

Shit. This was going to try his control like nothing had done in years. Grumbling under his breath, he dumped the steak on a plate and cut into it, eating at the counter and trying to figure out the best way to handle Ms. Sylvia James. So far, they were working together okay. Right?

Two nights in and they hadn’t tried to kill each other. She hadn’t tried to strangle him or anything. That was practically a record. Sadly, he brought out the worst in people and had been known to provoke them after only a few hours. Usually on purpose, so he could be on his own once more. He liked working with her, though.

And they were slowly finding out information. The problem was they weren’t finding it out fast and while he knew it worked that way, he could see the echoes of demons in her eyes. Something was pushing her hard on this case and he didn’t know what.

Every now and then, he caught a glimpse of something in her eyes—something dark and achingly sad. Like earlier. It wasn’t just sympathy for Pulaski’s victims, although God knew, that would be enough.

There wasn’t a level in hell hot enough for monsters like that one.  Of course,Torontohad no problem trying to think up perfectly painful, brutal deaths, even knowing they wouldn’t be bad enough.

But first they had to find him and figure out what he’d done with his victims.

Hearing a footstep, he looked up as he popped the last bite of the steak into his mouth. And he almost choked when he saw her standing there. Dumping the plate on the counter, he grabbed a glass of water he’d poured earlier and gulped it down like he was dying of thirst.

She was wearing one of his shirts.

Fuck, what was it about a woman in a man’s shirt, anyway? How could they look so good in a stupid T-shirt?

“Hey.” She leaned against the wall, a sly little smile on her lips, her hair hanging in damp, clinging ropes around her shoulders and back. “I guess I should have asked you, but I needed a shirt. I don’t usually pack pajamas.”

“Ah . . .”

Pushing off the wall, she shrugged a shoulder and said, “Can’t really wander around here naked, right?”

Naked. She couldn’t wander around here naked? Skimming his eyes over her lush curves, the sleek muscles, he met her eyes. “If I say I want the shirt back, does that mean you’ll wander around naked? If so, I’m very tempted to tell you that you can’t have the shirt.”

The smile on her mouth widened. “Can I get some water?”

“Sure.” Water. He needed to get her water. And then he needed to get his hands busy. Otherwise he was going to think about trying to touch her, even though she’d told him to back off. He had to go about this differently. Had to actually work at the seduction thing, and he’d probably have to work overtime since she was determined that he wouldn’t be seducing her. As he grabbed a glass, he noticed that his fingers were shaking.

This woman had him shaking.

This is bad. He had to get a grip.

After getting her some water from the fridge, he turned around and held it out. Was it his imagination or was there a devilish glint in those liquid, dark eyes? Her fingers brushed his as she accepted the glass and that slight touch sent a burning jolt through him.

Hell. He needed to get some distance between them and try to wrestle his body back under control.

Try. Turning around, he gripped the marble counter with one hand and tried to yank his body back under the chokehold of control, the one he had to use on nights of the full moon when he couldn’t shift—that iron control that he could command, when he needed it.

But he was failing.

Hell. He needed to get out of here. Out of here, away from her . . . clear his head. He’d shift and go for a run. A good hard run would help. It always did. Taking the edge off was the best thing for him. Actually, that needed to be the first thing he did—

Mind made up, he forced himself to let go of the counter so he could gather up the dishes from his meal. Still not looking in Sylvia’s direction, he rinsed the few dishes off and put them in the dishwasher. He had somebody come out once a month and clean for him, but that didn’t include doing the dishes.

Cleaning up after himself was a necessity, even if he was suddenly in a mad hurry to get out of there. Werewolves, like other shifters, like the vamps, tended to be pretty fastidious. It was a side effect of having overly sensitive noses.

“Can you go ahead and feed? I need to go for a run and I won’t be back before the sun rises.” He kept his eyes focused on the mundane chore of straightening up, although it really didn’t require that much attention. If he was looking at his hands, he wasn’t going to be looking at her, though, and he needed to avoid looking at her. Especially since she needed to feed . . . fuck.

There was a whisper—a familiar one—of cotton against flesh.

Turning his head slightly, he watched something black and soft fall to the floor.

His T-shirt.

His heart jumped into his throat, lodged there for about five seconds and made it impossible to breathe. Then it settled back in his chest, beating about two hundred beats a minute, he figured as he shut the dishwasher, still staring at the puddle of black cotton on the floor in front of him.

His palms were sweating as he lifted his head and stared at Sylvia, standing eighteen inches away, wearing nothing more than her damp hair and that devilish, cocky little smile.

“I don’t get seduced,” she said quietly. “I might decide to seduce somebody, or I might just decide to have wild and crazy sex with them. But I don’t get seduced.”

She closed the distance between them and reached out, trailed her fingers along the front of his shirt. “You still want to go for a run,Toronto?”

He couldn’t speak. For the life of him, he couldn’t say a damn word.

So instead, he gathered that dark, silky hair in one hand and slanted his mouth over hers. As she met his kiss, he wrapped his free arm around her waist and hauled her against him. Naked, her skin still warm from the bath, she fit him perfectly, those amazing curves aligning next to his body like she’d been made for him.

He growled against her lips as she rocked against him.

“I thought you said no grabby hands,” he muttered against her mouth.

“I wasn’t being completely honest . . . I planned to do plenty of grabbing. I just wanted to do it my way.” She pulled back a fraction, staring into his eyes, clear challenge written on her face. “Is that a problem?”

She was in his arms, naked. “Hell, no.”


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UTA: And here’s where that… (I reserve the right to modify/change/end contests) thing comes in handy.  I ended up sick.  Really sick and I can’t keep up with maintaining the long, drawn-out contest that I was planning, so instead of that, we’ll just make this a nice, long, drawn-out contest thread that will run until 4/10… comment to enter, and one person will be drawn for the goody-bag giveaway.

Winner’s name will be posted the week of 4/24.

Spread the word…comment, chat away about it.  Every comment in regards to the upcoming release will be entered into a giveaway to be given away (that’s a tongue twister) after release week.  One comment per blog post will be entered, so while I love it if you want to chat endlessly, you only get one entry per blog post and the contests will only be related to Hunter’s Rise.

Check the disclaimer-please.  I lose more contest winners this way because people don’t realize they have to check back to see if they’ve won. I don’t contact you.  You have to check back and an easy way to watch that is to sign up for the blogger feed by clicking that nifty little fire icon up above my header.

37 Replies to “Snippet time…contest (updated)”

  1. I always get a little bummed when a series ends. I understand that they have to but I’ve been known to continue the story on in my head. Yes, I can be strange.

  2. When a series ends it always is a real downer, especially this one and judging from the excerpt you are totally going out in style with this last story. I am really frothing at the mouth to see where this one takes us when it releases and as a huge fan of the series it is going on my auto buy pre-ordered books list with my next online order too!

  3. I hate that your Hunter series is ending, I have enjoyed them so much; I will check out the bookstore close to me to see if they plan on getting the book otherwise will order it.

  4. I’m sorry sales are slumping, but I’m very glad to have discovered you. You have a true fan here 🙂

  5. I’m so bummed that this series is ending! 🙁 But I am looking forward to Hunter’s Rise!!

  6. I am not happy that the series is ending. You are a very talented author and I am a huge fan of yours so I will continue to be on the lookout for new and exciting stories by you!!

  7. I wish the series wasn’t ending, but I’m happy we’ll have other books from you to look forward to.

  8. I’m always a bit sad when a series ends. I get invested in the characters and like to see how that world continues to evolve and grow with primary characters sticking around as secondary characters, etc. Wishing you all the best!

  9. Although I love series, after some time (and more books) it’s hard to keep track of everything, especially if the same universe isn’t the only connecting thing through series but instead we follow the same characters, it can get frustrating. But still, I am sad that you have to end your series. Hope your health will improve soon!

  10. It makes me sad to see the series end. this is one of my favorite series and the Hunter series was my first exposure to your writing. I’m sorry it is ending.

  11. I am a major Twilight fan and I really dread the end of the movies – and that there will be no more books. I will continue to re-read and watch as I love the story with the hope and love it inspires. I live there in the story.

  12. I can’t believe the series is ending. I’m so bummed! I’ll just have to keep re-reading.
    Feel better!!!!
    Thanks for the giveaway.

    Joanne B

  13. I am always hopeful that when a favorite series ends the author has another one in the works.

  14. I love the Hunters series and am bummed that it is ending!
    Hope you are feeling better soon!

  15. It’s always sad to say “goodbye” to a series, whether you are reading it or writing it. It’s like saying goodbye to family, knowing you’ll never see them again. Feel better soon, Girlfriend.

  16. I’m so excited for this book! I’ve already preordered it for my Kindle. I hope you get feeling better soon, I have asthma and chronic bronchitis so I understand a little of what you’re going through.

  17. It’s sad to see a series you love end. You get so wrapped up in their stories, its like you know them personally. Hope you feel better soon!

  18. Sorry to hear that you got sick. That sucks! Thanks for the contest. I’m kind of glad it’s working this way because I can’t follow a long contest right now. I am so busy I am running multiple calendars to just keep it all straight! Thanks for the giveaway. Bummer that the series is coming to an end but I am looking forward to seeing what you come up with next!

  19. I know they can’t go on forever but I’m always sad to see a series that I really enjoy end.

  20. This book is H-O-T!!! Can’t wait for it to come out! I’m sorry the series is ending… I liked all the books I have read in this series!

  21. I am terribly sorry to hear that you have been ill; sending positive, healing thoughts your wayl May you have a quick and full recovery.

    As for the series, I have to admit that I’ve not yet had a chance to read any of it yet but do have several of the earlier books in the series so I guess I had better get busy and purchase the rest of them and preorder Hunter’s Rise.

    Thank you for the opportunity to win your giveaway but more importantly, take the time you need to get well!

  22. I’m sorry to see that the series is ending but I understand how these things go. I hope you feel better soon.

    I’m looking forward to the new book!

  23. Great excerpt and book cover. I love this series and hate to see it end. 🙂

  24. I’m a bit bummed that sales are slow and the series is ending. I hate letting go of a good series.

    On the serious note, I hope you feel better. Take care of yourself first and foremost!

  25. I am so sad to see this series ending. It was the one of the first one I ever started on ebooks. Loved it and it has been one of my favorites every since. I will be crossing my fingers and toes that this one sells so well that you might get to continue. I know I’ll be buying my copy lol.Hope your feeling better soon.

  26. I’m sorry you’ve been feeling badly. We’ve had a lot of bugs around our house lately, and it’s been frustrating– everyone hacking up stuff. LOL I hope you’re starting to feel better:)

    I loved the excerpt. It’s sad the series is ending, but you have so many good ideas that it’s cool waiting to see what you’ll come up with next!

  27. I cant believe the series is ending!!! But this book is looking like another winner and a good way to go out w/a bang!!! Trying to wait patiently for it to be released!!! U keep writing and i’ll keep buying!! God bless u and urs Shiloh!!!

  28. I am a big fan of your stories, Shi, and will be sorry to see the Hunter’s series end. Definitely looking forward to whatever stories are up next for all your fans to enjoy.

  29. I am very sorry to see this series end. Hunter’s Need was the book that got me “into you”, & I’ve discovered so many other fantastic books. I also follow you on twitter & read your blog, & getting to know you that way has been a lot of fun. I’m sending lots of positive, healing-ish thoughts your way. I’m not sure how well that works, but it’s worth a try 🙂 I hope you’re feeling better soon!

  30. I hate when a series ends. I love visiting old friends in new books.

  31. I enjoyed the excerpt. Sorry to hear that the series is ending. It seems like a great series.

  32. Oh no! I hate when things come to an end. Sigh. But you are an amazing writer, and I can’t wait to read what you have in store for us in the future!

  33. It’s too bad that it’s ending and I hope you are feeling better.

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