So I’m editing IF YOU KNOW HER, the last book in the RS trilogy.
Came across this little bit.
He stroked his hand up her lung.
First…ewwwww. Second…getting that right word is crucial.
It should have read:
He stroked his hand up her leg.
Much less gross.
I’m guest-blogging at Fresh Fiction today. 🙂
That’s funny. Even got my hubs to laugh ;). Glad you caught it.
I thought you were off there for a moment.
I guess it would depend on the genre LOL.
I can only assume the stroking occurred during an autopsy!
JenB… ewwww!!!!! LOL