Fun with words…

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So I’m editing IF YOU KNOW HER, the last book in the RS trilogy.

Came across this little bit.

He stroked his hand up her lung.

First…ewwwww. Second…getting that right word is crucial.

It should have read:

He stroked his hand up her leg.

Much less gross.

I’m guest-blogging at Fresh Fiction today.

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Viki S. says:

11 June, 2011 at 10:41 am

That’s funny. Even got my hubs to laugh . Glad you caught it.
Diane Sadler says:

11 June, 2011 at 4:06 pm

I thought you were off there for a moment.
tennismom mary g says:

11 June, 2011 at 5:39 pm

I guess it would depend on the genre LOL.
Jen B. says:

11 June, 2011 at 9:17 pm

I can only assume the stroking occurred during an autopsy!
Shiloh Walker says:

12 June, 2011 at 9:30 pm

JenB… ewwww!!!!! LOL